I like the looks of it.
As a note, Goretex (membrane) fabric on packs, especially on the inside of packs, serve absolutely no purpose compared to other completely non-breathable fabrics waterproof fabrics. If that fabric has a DWR coating, and you have the face facing inwards in the pack, you'll actually keep water in the pack rather than forcing it out (which requires pressure, and packs doesn't have any). I'd rather use a lightweight nylon if you need an interior fabric.